tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7842827498823766539.post1923165973774827024..comments2023-04-30T06:39:21.837-07:00Comments on मासूम लम्हे................... (:something like me :): ek chhoti si kahani..."smriti"दिपाली "आब"http://www.blogger.com/profile/18338304714938415394noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7842827498823766539.post-26400502589851204452011-03-22T23:31:25.262-07:002011-03-22T23:31:25.262-07:00Rula diya na hame bhi....
kahani kux adhuri si lag...Rula diya na hame bhi....<br />kahani kux adhuri si lagi....ek end to hona chahiye tha.<br />milwa dijiye us diwane ko........<br />ek diwane ham bhi hain...........itna lamba intejar na karwa kijiye....apni kalam ka.<br /><br />Badhai.Ravi Rajbharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16224660000339492496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7842827498823766539.post-36043723837025635432011-03-22T09:14:01.402-07:002011-03-22T09:14:01.402-07:00दीपाली जी, आप की लेखन शैली बहुत बढ़िया है.
लेकिन म...दीपाली जी, आप की लेखन शैली बहुत बढ़िया है.<br />लेकिन मुझे कहानी कुछ अधूरी लगी.<br />उम्मीद है आगे की कहानी भी पढने को मिलेगी.<br />सलाम.विशालhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06351646493594437643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7842827498823766539.post-16733268632796192422009-10-05T07:11:33.818-07:002009-10-05T07:11:33.818-07:00really hats off for all the creations
pahli bar ki...really hats off for all the creations<br />pahli bar kisi ki prashnasha kar raha hun itni <br />really really good<br />and its only because of ur writing really...aman dalalAMANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09905313793614386878noreply@blogger.com